Revision Memo
Revision is an important step in any essay. I chose to revise my argumentative essay on "Taking a Gap Year", because I wanted to strengthen all my weak points and provide more detail on the benefits of taking a gap year. Not only did I strengthen my weak areas, I improved my thesis statement and replaced my original sources with more credible and informative sources. Also, I increased my word count which gave me the ability to enhance the usefulness of the gap year. Overall the changes in my whole project tremendously enhanced my argument on the positive impact and the important benefits of students taking a gap year.